Helpful Show vs. Tell Phrases
Beforehand a fire ensued, encompassing 4 stately
houses, in the outcome the firefighters were the true lifesavers… The young
survivors’ bewilderment was replaced with pink, purple and orange bubbles of
joy welling up inside, clusters of them in fact!!... Just waiting to explode
into even more super bright colors, and eventually escaping in the
form of innocent smiles of gratitude.
Beforehand, Clarity had poured two crystal bowls full with
overflowing amounts of m&m’s. The
neatly dressed devil in the fiery red suit sitting on her right shoulder had a
scrolling enticing checklist representing every single wonderful benefit of
devouring all of that candy. The arc of
his smile was as spanning as half the circumference of the sun, the rays of his
gleaming white teeth, second only in brilliance to the effervescent sparkle found
in his periodically winking right eye.
Even the heavenly dressed angel sitting on her right shoulder listened
intently as the checklist was read in its glowing entirety.
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